News stories on TV and in newspapers are very often accompanied by pictures. Some people say that these pictures are more effective than words. Whats your opinion about it?

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are accompanied in most of the TV and newspapers to present new
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very frequently. Recently there
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different
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carried, some
people
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say
pictures
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are more effective and another set of
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has
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view that
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will have more impact and effect. In my opinion,
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of
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will have more emphasis on readers and viewers rather than
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. Newfangled
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telecasted
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television and written in newspapers have concentrated more
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a picture.
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will not keep the attention of the viewers or readers, since what you see as
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a picture
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mind
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cannot
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for a long time and
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to the outside world. The reason is,
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that most
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of the
viewer's
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viewers
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will not have proficient observation skills,
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the message
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will not
convey
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be conveyed
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properly.
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recent study by "Brain Games"
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mind
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reading company revealed that 75% of
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cannot keep
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in
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for a long time.
To conclude
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,
stories
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accompanied by
pictures
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will not have
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the expected
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impact on the viewers.
Words
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are the way to express our opinions.
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the human memory for a long time and has a significant effect. The reason is, as you read
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abstract visualization will start in your
mind
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.
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will have more emphasis.
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science
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journal published recently proved
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that 90
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% of
people
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who read
words
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can convey the
stories
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in a better way. They can
also
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attract
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people's
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attention. To summarise,
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have more power rather than
pictures
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. More visuals are accompanied
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by
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making new documentaries both in electronic and print media. The
pictures
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are accompanied
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apply
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will not have
expected
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the expected
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effect.
Words
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will be logical and have prominent emphasis. My opinion is
words
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are more powerful than
pictures
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and will be effective.
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coherence cohesion
Provide a clearer introduction that clearly states your opinion and the reasons for it.
task achievement
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grammatical range and accuracy
Improve sentence structures and use more varied vocabulary.

Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • convey
  • emotions
  • capture
  • attention
  • evoke
  • impact
  • context
  • detailed information
  • journalism
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