Your town council has decided to demolish historic building due to lack of funds to renovate. Write a letter to your council man. In your letter, you should say: • why it is important to preserve historic building • how the funds could be generated.

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I have been a resident of your town

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20 years and have

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had a reason to write to you before. Today, I am writing to express my concern regarding the decision of demolishing the ‘Lalbag Fort’, which is one of the historic buildings in Bangladesh.

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fort is the pride of our city and

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lots of historical evidence. The most important thing is that because of the building every year about 2,000 tourists visit

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our area.

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not only helps to get popularity among outside countries but

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supports to boost up our local economy. The funding problems of renovating that historical establishment can be solved by arranging sponsorship. I have talked with three multinational companies, who have agreed to provide find to maintain the building. They have asked

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official proposal from the town council regarding

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matter. I have attached detail about those companies, which will help you to make the decision. I am looking forward to your positive feedback and expecting your support and cooperation to save our historic building.

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Lexical resource: 5.0

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Task Achievement: 5.0

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Your town council has decided to demolish historic building due to lack of funds to renovate. Write a letter to your council man. In your letter, you should say: • why it is important to preserve historic building • how the funds could be generated.

The Greeting

We should return to traditional and older values of respect for family and community. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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