Some people think the government funding should not be used for supporting art and culture, others think supporting cultural activities may be beneficial for the population and the culture. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Art in many times and by many ways can represent the

cutlture

a particular society at a particular time and place

culture

of countries.

Governement

Suggestion

The government

Government

Governments

must support Art. Though, some people think it is a waste of time and resources. Art is a window of each country history and culture. Generations can depend on arts to build their knowledge about their own history.

Futhermore

in addition

Furthermore

,

Museumes

a depository for collecting and displaying objects having scientific or historical or artistic value

museums

are usually one of the attractive places that tourists usually

headed

pay close attention to; give heed to

heeded

.

Governemental

Suggestion

Governmental

support that

include

Suggestion

includes

not only financial but

also

, efforts to protect these great works must be offered. In my opinion,

govenements

the organization that is the governing authority of a political unit

governments

should motivate artists to create projects presenting the culture of that country. On

othe

definite article

the

other

other hand, some people think that

governemental

relating to or dealing with the affairs or structure of government or politics or the state

governmental

efforts must not be spent to support art. They may think

education

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education, for

for

example is

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example, is

more important for the population and

governements

the organization that is the governing authority of a political unit

governments

government

should focus on.

However

, art is a great educational method could not be ignored. For students who even go for

subspeciality

away from arts like engineering. They need to have some background of

arts

Suggestion

the arts

which will help them

building

Suggestion

build

to build

up their imagination and creativity. In my opinion, all countries must put all the efforts needed to cultivate arts culture. Balancing of the funds

are spended

Suggestion

is spent

are spent

in each scatter is important. At the end, education and art are both really valuable for citizens.