some people think that the teenage years are the happiest times of most people's lives. Others think that adult life brings more happiness, in despite of great responsibilities. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

There is no doubt that being
teeneger
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a teenager
teenager
teenagers
is one of the most fascinating
part
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parts
of the
life
.
In contrast
,
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,
while some argue that
adulthood
is brought happy moments compared to teenage years, I support those who think that teenager
life
is beautiful because
this
period of
life
has minimum responsibilities and obligations. On the one hand, supporters who believe that
adulthood
life
is happiest point out that it gives freedom.
In other words
,
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,
as any adult enters into to the
adulthood
, societies allow them to have
independent
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an independent life
independent lives
life
and respect his individuality.
For
instance in
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instance, in
India, minimum age for marriage is 21 for male and 18 for girls, about to enter
adulthood
. Apart from these
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,
in many legal matters
until
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to
anyone completes his 18 years consider as a child
;
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;
therefore
,
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,
they cannot own bank account without their
parents
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parents'
parent's
consent.
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The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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