International travel is becoming cheaper and more countries are opening their doors to increase the number of tourists. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages ?

In
contemporary era
Suggestion
the contemporary era
, many people prefer the travelling with sophisticated technology. Some person
like
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likes
to historical places
.
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.
Human beings want to
tavel
change location; move, travel, or proceed, also metaphorically
travel
for
internationl
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international
country. So more nation
provide
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provides
the
traveling
the act of going from one place to another
travelling
chance for people.
This
eassy
an analytic or interpretive literary composition
essay
intends outline both
benifits
financial assistance in time of need
benefits
and
limitions
the greatest possible degree of something
limits
limitations
travel for social beings.
This
is a heavy side, human beings get a
broden
an onerous or difficult concern
burden
a
horizen knowledge
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horizon, knowledge
horizon knowledge
related society and culture.
Moreover
,
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,
they
are get
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are getting
best
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better
job opportunities because people easily
communication
Suggestion
communicate
with international
person
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personalities
.
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.
Due to make a bright future and become a "bread
andbutter
Suggestion
and butter
". Despite of it, travel is a best way for social beings because it is a big chance for people make a "name and fame" in outside country
.
Accept space
.
In
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On
the down side, people want to
tavel
change location; move, travel, or proceed, also metaphorically
travel
in
intrenational
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international
country. Many people go abroad and increase
thr
of them or themselves
their
the
population as well as
incined
(often followed by 'to') having a preference, disposition, or tendency
inclined
unkind
unsigned
pollution. Individual faced
host
Suggestion
a host
of problem
such
as headache, disease, cancer
,
Accept space
,
and other with
deforstion
the process of decomposing organic matter (as in sewage) by bacteria or by chemical action or heat
digestion
. In
addtion
a component that is added to something to improve it
addition
to, reduce the wildlife because social beings make a home for
live
Suggestion
life
and cut the tree for industrials. Due to
,
Accept space
,
finished the natural beauty and
resoures
available source of wealth; a new or reserve supply that can be drawn upon when needed
resources
. To
conculde
decide by reasoning; draw or come to a conclusion
conclude
coincide
concede
, it can be noted that its many positive yet negative
can not
can not
cannot
be
neglacted
disregarded
neglected
.
Accept space
.
Human beings go abroad for
travel but
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travel, but
limited, better it is.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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