Some people believe that it is good idea to express that point of view and ideas through social media however others believe opposite do you agree or disagree

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in contrast
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The
society
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society
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society
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At the outset, in today's hectic life people busy schedule matter social media had them
for example
, greeting Diwali through social media is one of the most popular medium.That st
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stands
s an epitome. Another relevant argument to support
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the social media side
Despite of
this
, there are some drawbacks of social media
first
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society
spread some rumours by posting ca
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as a result
there are more and more conflict happen between the community.
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keeping
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the government
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this
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society
by doing
this
it ultimately our lots of people.
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