Some people think that zoos are all cruel and should be closed down. Others however believe that zoos can be useful in protecting wild animals. Discuss both opinions and give your own opinion.

Freedom is one of those
speciial
unique or specific to a person or thing or category
special
specially
gifts which is provided by the almighty to every organism on
this
earth. Every living being has an instinct inclined more toward being free rather than to live a life full of luxury but with
boundations
.
with
Suggestion
With
the advent of human
interuptions
a mutual or reciprocal action; interacting
interactions
to the
nature
and the
enviroment considerable
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environment, considerable
environment considerable
damage has been done.And In
this
essay I would be discussing the
affect
a phenomenon that follows and is caused by some previous phenomenon
effect
of human
activites
any specific behavior
activities
to the wildlife. In
this
contemporary era
,
Accept space
,
with the
increase
in the human population
their
in or at that place
there
is
also
increasing the amusement types of the people and
this
has led to drastically
increase
in the confinements of wild animals which are used for the entertainment of the general public. With the
increase
in the popularity of
such
parks
,
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,
their
in or at that place
there
is
also
increasing
henious
extremely wicked, deeply criminal
heinous
crimes against animals.To make money poachers and hunter has exploited the wildlife to
such
an extent that today considerable number of animal species are on the verge of extinction. Contrary to
this
,
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,
Zoological gardens
also
serve an
examplar
worthy of imitation
exemplary
place for juveniles to learn about the
nature
and its evolution. They get to know about the fauna of their region and being close to the
nature
inculcated
with in
internal to, not outside; located in the bounds of
within
them the feeling of love to the mother
nature
.
Moreover
Accept comma addition
Moreover, such
such
a place could be a haven for those species which
are being killed
Suggestion
is being killed
in the open for either their flesh
,
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,
ivory or skin.
Last
but not the least
,
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,
I would say that
such
estate
shuold
expresses an emotional, practical, or other reason for doing something
should
be promoted on the motive of only to conserve
nature
,
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,
and to
increase
a sense of responsibility in the society towards the planet, else we would be ending ourself into an uninhabitable zone.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • animal welfare
  • conservation
  • captive breeding
  • habitat
  • ethical issues
  • zoochosis
  • endangered species
  • genetic diversity
  • reintroduction programs
  • wildlife education
  • sanctuary
  • natural living conditions
  • artificial environments
  • behavioral enrichment
  • ecosystem
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