The charts show how tourism to two countries changed over a 50-year period. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts show how tourism to two countries changed over a 50-year period.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The pie charts give information about the percentage of
tourists
from different places
such
us:
Asia
,
USA
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the USA
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, Britain and
Europe
to Australia and German between 1960 and 2010.
Overall
, from 1960 to 2010 there was a
decreased
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decrease
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in Australian
visitors
form
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from
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Europe
,
USA
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the USA
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and Britain
por
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for
el contrario
visitors
from
Asia
had a significant increase. Germany for its part had a
gently
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gentle
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decrease in
tourists
from
Europe
and USA
,
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and a rise in
visitors
from
Asia
and
Europe
. In 1960 more than 50% of the
tourists
in Australia were from
Europe
and in 2010 only 10% corresponds to people from
this
continent. The majority of
visitors
in Australia in 2010 were Asians reaching over 60% of the total of its
tourists
. The majority of
tourists
in Germany in 1960 were from
Europe
(45%) and only 10% came from
Asia
. By 2010 Europeans kept
its
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their
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40% participation and
Asia
had
and
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an
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increase from 10% to 25%.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words tourists, asia, europe, visitors with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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