The graph below shows the number of university graduates in Canada from 1992 to 2007. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph represents how many men and
women
completed their Use synonyms
university
education between 1992 and 2007.
Use synonyms
Overall
, Linking Words
women
accounted for the majority of people who left Use synonyms
university
with a Use synonyms
degree
within Use synonyms
this
Linking Words
period
. Use synonyms
Moreover
, the rate of growth for the Linking Words
number
of female Use synonyms
university
Use synonyms
graduates
outstripped that of male Use synonyms
university
Use synonyms
graduates
.
For Use synonyms
women
, there was an upward trend regarding the Use synonyms
number
of Use synonyms
university
Use synonyms
graduates
. More specifically, from 1992 to 1994, an increasing Use synonyms
number
of Use synonyms
women
obtained a Use synonyms
university
Use synonyms
degree
, from less than 100 Use synonyms
thousand
to approximately 103 Use synonyms
thousand
people, but the Use synonyms
period
from 1994 to 1997 observed a slump to the mark of 100 Use synonyms
thousand
. Since 1997, Use synonyms
however
, a rise in the Linking Words
number
of Use synonyms
women
graduating from Use synonyms
university
occurred, which resulted in Use synonyms
an
50% increase to around 150 Change the article
a
thousand
Use synonyms
graduates
.
As for the Use synonyms
number
of male Use synonyms
university
Use synonyms
graduates
, there was Use synonyms
also
Linking Words
overall
growth. Going into more detail, the first three years of the Linking Words
overall
Linking Words
period
saw a slight bump in the Use synonyms
number
of men completing a Use synonyms
university
Use synonyms
degree
, from 70 Use synonyms
thousand
to 73 Use synonyms
thousand
, but Use synonyms
then
the figures experienced a slight decrease until 1988Linking Words
,
when 70 Remove the comma
apply
thousand
men obtained a Use synonyms
university
Use synonyms
degree
. The Use synonyms
next
three years saw erratic change around Linking Words
mark
of 71 Add an article
the mark
thousand
male Use synonyms
university
Use synonyms
graduates
in the figures, yet, from 2001 onwards, the Use synonyms
number
of male Use synonyms
university
Use synonyms
graduates
rose consistently, ultimately reaching approximately 95 Use synonyms
thousand
people by the end of the Use synonyms
period
.Use synonyms
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