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Some people think schools should teach students to form good behaviour in addition to providing formal education. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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The upbringing of children plays a vital role in the overall development of an
adolescent
.
Although
, some people believe that the educational institutions along, with education should
also
 teach good behaviour to their students others contradict that it is the responsibility of the parents to teach discipline to their children. In my view, it is should be a joint responsibility of the teachers and parents to groom the children.
To begin
 with, parents are a role model for their children. The behaviour of the parents directly can influence the
adolescent
. If the parents set the right example at home,
this
 would help in developing the same traits in a
child
. To illustrate, if parents do recycling of products, he could help in creating awareness in his
child
, which would encourage the
child
 to follow the same.
In addition
, the personality of a person is
also
 a reflection of the culture he follows.
This
 is something that a
child
 learns at home.
For example
, in my culture, it is important to greet the adults with respect,
hence
, we normally touch the feet of the adults, which shows respect towards them.
However
, children
also
 spend a good amount of time in school. The institutions can
also
 play a role in educating the children by adding courses as a part of their curriculum. If the children have courses defined, it would teach and educate the
child
.
This
 would help in developing good characteristics in the behaviour of the
adolescent
. To conclude, it is vital for both the parents and the teachers to educate the children. A joint effort will help in the overall development of the personality of the
adolescent
. A good grooming will only be beneficial for the children in a long run of life.
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