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The rise of convenience foods has helped people keep up with the speed of the modern life style. What are the advantages of this trend? Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

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Nowadays,
majority
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the majority
 of people have been significantly increased fast
food
 consumption because of busy
life-style
a manner of living that reflects the person's values and attitudes
lifestyles
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While I accept that there are advantages of convenience foods
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,
 ı believe that consuming fast
food
regularily
in a regular manner
regularly
 may affect adversely people's health.In my opinion
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 the disadvantages of convenience foods
outweight
be heavier than
outweigh
outweighed
outweighs
 the advantages of it.
To begin
 with, it is
obvios
easily perceived by the senses or grasped by the mind
obvious
 that fast
food
 stores in all around the world have been substantially increased the
last
 past years.
Such
 as
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 KFC
,
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 Mc Donalds and Burger Kıng.Reaching easier and cook shorter time
convenıence
food
 products than fruit and vegetables
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 human being have been more appropriate option for those.
In other words
convenıence
 foods are not only cost-effective but
also
 save time
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To exemplified by
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exemplified by
To exemplify by
To exemplify exemplify by
 a
reserarch
systematic investigation to establish facts
research
 conducted in the USA, fast foods are being consumed by %70 of Americans.
Thus
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,
 humankind may allow their sum of time for themselves hobbies and occupies.
However
, it is
inevitable fact
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an inevitable fact
 that
convenıence
 foods may affect detrimentally on public health due to quantity of products. Fast foods containing in the high proportion of fat and salt
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 they may be more appetizing
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 which may cause
increasing
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increased
 the level of obesity and high blood
preesure
the force applied to a unit area of surface; measured in pascals (SI unit) or in dynes (cgs unit)
pressure
pressures
.
Moreover
,
convenıence
 foods are addictive long-lasting excessive consuming
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 Should governments restrict the numbers of fast -
food
 chains, they have to allow the health care sum of their budget.
Hence
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 governments should take
step
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steps
 to prevent a lot of
hazardous
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hazards
. In conclusıon
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 it seems to me that
regarless
in spite of everything; without regard to drawbacks
regardless
 of the benefits of
convenıence
 foods
,
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 its detrimental effect can be more disadvantages for people.

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