Computer games and films containing violence are popular today. Some people think that these are harmful for our society and the government should ban them. Other argue that such games and films are fine for entertainment. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

In the present

world

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,

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violence

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violent

computer games and movies are increasingly embraced by

individuals particularly

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individuals, particularly

youth and children,

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however some

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however, some

critics are on the conviction that

such

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violence

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stuff should be abandoned by

government

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the government

since they trigger real

violence

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and aggression in society.

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hand advocators

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hand, advocates

hand advocates

mention

entertainment aspect

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the entertainment aspect

of them and assert that the reason of

violence

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does not justify

such

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a prohibition. It is believed by opponents that exposure of

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violence

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violent

films and games should be prohibited by

government

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the government

as they raise the sense of aggression among individuals in the real

world

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and desensitize them to the crime; they assert that

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adverse effect can be more devastating with regard to the children who are perfectly affected by them since they are not mature enough and as a way of illustration they point out the rising number of shootings at schools.

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hand fans

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hand, fans

of

such

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kind of movies and games cite entertaining perspectives

of

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on

them. They refer to

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violence

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violent

games and movies as healthy recreation that could simultaneously raise social awareness of threatening circumstances in the real

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as well as speed up their reaction to possible dangers.

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Moreover they

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Moreover, they

mention high turnover in

this

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industry which

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industry, which

is not reasonable to be prohibited. They declare that

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a number of studies have been reported the direct correlation between

violence

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in

media

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the media

and

violence

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in the real

world

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but an assertive claim have not been stated so far. In conclusion,

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however there

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however, there

are a great deal of implication with regard to the relationship between

exposure

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exposure, violence

violence

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in

movies and games and

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movies, games and violence

movies games and violence

violence

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in the real

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world but

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world, but

a definite opinion has not been asserted yet, so I assume it would not be justifiable to ban these kinds of films and games as they play an important role in individuals recreations and

economic sector

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the economic sector

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