Some people believe that it is good idea to express their point of view and ideas through social media however others believe opposite do you agree or disagree

In
this
state-of-the-art age Ultra morning technology has infiltrated in all aspects of human life. So expressing a better thought from social media is one of the most easiest way.
In contrast
, other people of the Society opine that it is harmful. I agree with the given statement that social media has very beneficial
for
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to
the Society. The reasons for my inclination are articulated below trailed paragraphs. At the outset, in today's hectic life people have no time to travel so far in
this
matter social media had had them
for example
,
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,
my uncle
live
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lives
in London by past five
year
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years
so
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
greeting
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greet
diwali
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Diwali
through social media.
Moreover
, another relevant argument to support
this
ideology is it can be
also
used to collect the donation.To cite an example famous
bollywood
the film industry of India
Bollywood
actor
akshay
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Akshay
kumar
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Kumar
start the moment to gain donation for the welfare of the army man's family through the well known 'Bharat
ke
veer'
paytem
app.It has
also
been helpful to maintain cleanliness and traffic control by posting pics on the social media side. Despite of
this
,
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,
there are some drawbacks of social media.
First
and foremost is that some people of the population spread some rumours but posting cast and community related photo and accomplish that political agenda
as a result
, there are Martin more conflict happened between masses. Sometime there are higher chances that riots will be happen.
Nevertheless
, cyber police has been keeping
I
objective form of "I"
me
on it and give strict and punishment to
this
type of person. People have a being of
aware
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awareness
about and it is not a big problem. Accommodating all the, point elaborate it can be concluded that, even though there are some negative outcome of
this but
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this, but
it can be easily neglected by
it's
of a thing, of it; possessive form of "it"
its
positive.In my point of view, Governmental should impose heavy penalty to the perennial nuisance of the public by doing
this
it ultimately aware lots of people.
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