Some people say that living in high-rise apartments feels very lonely, and makes people unhappy. Others say there are advantages to lining in an independent house. Discuss both views and ggive your opinions.

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The human is a social animal and is born with different types of dispositions. Whatever is good for someone, may be loathed by

other

plural of other; the people or things not already mentioned

others

. There are certain people who love to stay in high-rise

apartment

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and that makes them happy, whereas many people won’t agree with the view, as they would like to stay in an independent

house

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. I agree with the statement partially as both have their own pros and cons and

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is highly dependent upon location. Due to urbanisation, people have migrated from rural areas of country to cities, which has lead to space crunch in cities.

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, policy makers followed a wiser approach to expand city vertically than horizontally. The high-rise apartments are

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the results

results

result

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approach. The benefit of

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apartment

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for

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the residents is that the apartments are safer when compared to independent houses and share common facilities among residents, which reduces the worries of arranging basic utilities.

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, many people adore the view from

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apartments. On the flip side, the independent

house

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provides flexibility for

home owner

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home owners

the home owner

a home owner

to construct the

house

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, as per his own wish, which could be a criteria for one's happiness.

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this

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, there is ample space for people staying in the

house

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. There won’t be many rules or restrictions

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the independent

house

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, which a

person

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staying in an

apartment

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needs to abide

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, a

person

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can designate a space or customise the

house

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to cater to his/her hobbies,

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as having a small garden or keep a pet. Whereas the

person

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staying in the

house

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will have to make own arrangements to make the place safer to stay, by installing the security equipments.

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would definitely burn a hole in one's pocket. In conclusion, the most important thing is to feel good about the place where a

person

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is staying. Feeling happy in a small

apartment

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or an independent

house

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depends on the choice of an individual which is

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supplemented by the financial capacity.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

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Lexical resource: 5.0

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Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

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Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

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Some people say that living in high-rise apartments feels very lonely, and makes people unhappy. Others say there are advantages to lining in an independent house. Discuss both views and ggive your opinions.

Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

In modern times, children are spending less time with their families and more time with their friends. Why has this change occurred? Do you think parents should force their children to spend more time at home?

People living in the 21st century have a better life quality than people who lived in previous times. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement.