Some people say that living in high-rise apartments feels very lonely, and makes people unhappy. Others say there are advantages to lining in an independent house. Discuss both views and ggive your opinions.

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The human is a social animal and is born with different types of dispositions. Whatever is good for someone, may be loathed by
other
plural of other; the people or things not already mentioned
others
. There are certain people who love to stay in high-rise
apartment
and that makes them happy, whereas many people won’t agree with the view, as they would like to stay in an independent
house
. I agree with the statement partially as both have their own pros and cons and
this
is highly dependent upon location. Due to urbanisation, people have migrated from rural areas of country to cities, which has lead to space crunch in cities.
Hence
, policy makers followed a wiser approach to expand city vertically than horizontally. The high-rise apartments are
resultant
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the results
results
result
of
this
approach. The benefit of
such
apartment
for
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of
the residents is that the apartments are safer when compared to independent houses and share common facilities among residents, which reduces the worries of arranging basic utilities.
Moreover
, many people adore the view from
such
apartments. On the flip side, the independent
house
provides flexibility for
home owner
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home owners
the home owner
a home owner
to construct the
house
, as per his own wish, which could be a criteria for one's happiness.
In addition
to
this
, there is ample space for people staying in the
house
. There won’t be many rules or restrictions
in
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on
the independent
house
, which a
person
staying in an
apartment
needs to abide
with
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by
.
Furthermore
, a
person
can designate a space or customise the
house
to cater to his/her hobbies,
such
as having a small garden or keep a pet. Whereas the
person
staying in the
house
will have to make own arrangements to make the place safer to stay, by installing the security equipments.
This
would definitely burn a hole in one's pocket. In conclusion, the most important thing is to feel good about the place where a
person
is staying. Feeling happy in a small
apartment
or an independent
house
depends on the choice of an individual which is
also
supplemented by the financial capacity.

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