In a number of countries, some people think it is necessary to spend large sums of money on constructing new railway lines for very fast trains between cities. Others believe the money should be spent on improving existing public transport. Discuss both of these views and give your own opinion.

various
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Various
controversy
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controversies
has emerged
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have emerged
as to whether invest in constructing new railway lines between cities. Others argue that ameliorating existing public transportation should be
priority
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a priority
the priority
. In
this
essay, I will present both sides of viewpoints and
then
concluded by my perspective. Advocates of enhancing
transport
between cities believe that
this
can boost economy growth. With the improvement of
transport
, people can save plenty of commuting time.
This
means that job seekers could go to other cities to have more job opportunities. Take Taiwan High Speed Rail as an example.
This
construction raised many disputes at
first
;
however
,
it
it is
it's
become the most frequently use
transport
for teachers which they could teach in north and south within one day.
On the other hand
, the new railway between cities could
also
stimulate the tourism.
Such
convenient situation might attract more tourist for visiting tourist attractions and increase local economy.
This
is
also
another way to offer more job opportunities for local residents and lead to decrease the number of unemployment. In terms of people who regard improving current public
transport
as an urgent need,
this
statement could be understandable. They see citizens' safety is an important issue. With worse
traffic
system easily cause
traffic
congestion, especially in the peak hour. In
such
circumstance, the rate of accident will rise at the same time.
Therefore
, the better public
transport
could reduce the use of private cars and alleviate the
traffic
load.
This
could reduce the possibility of
traffic
accidents simultaneously. From my perspective, it is vital that transportation between cities should be constructed in order to have
better economic condition
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a better economic condition
, but still, people
can not
can not
cannot
ignore the importance of the improvement of local public
transport
. To sum up, I think both of the constructions should be implemented in a
balance
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balanced
way to increase people's welfare.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • infrastructure
  • efficient
  • congestion
  • sustainable
  • environmentally friendly
  • connectivity
  • economic growth
  • public transportation
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