In a number of countries, some people think it is necessary to spend large sums of money on constructing new railway lines for very fast trains between cities. Others believe the money should be spent on improving existing public transport. Discuss both of these views and give your own opinion.

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controversies

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have emerged

as to whether invest in constructing new railway lines between cities. Others argue that ameliorating existing public transportation should be

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a priority

the priority

. In

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concluded by my perspective. Advocates of enhancing

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between cities believe that

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can boost economy growth. With the improvement of

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, people can save plenty of commuting time.

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means that job seekers could go to other cities to have more job opportunities. Take Taiwan High Speed Rail as an example.

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construction raised many disputes at

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;

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for teachers which they could teach in north and south within one day.

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, the new railway between cities could

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stimulate the tourism.

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convenient situation might attract more tourist for visiting tourist attractions and increase local economy.

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another way to offer more job opportunities for local residents and lead to decrease the number of unemployment. In terms of people who regard improving current public

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as an urgent need,

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statement could be understandable. They see citizens' safety is an important issue. With worse

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system easily cause

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congestion, especially in the peak hour. In

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circumstance, the rate of accident will rise at the same time.

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, the better public

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could reduce the use of private cars and alleviate the

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load.

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could reduce the possibility of

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accidents simultaneously. From my perspective, it is vital that transportation between cities should be constructed in order to have

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a better economic condition

, but still, people

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ignore the importance of the improvement of local public

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. To sum up, I think both of the constructions should be implemented in a

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balanced

way to increase people's welfare.