Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement.

It is thought by some people that in the present age available options are
manyfold
a pipe that has several lateral outlets to or from other pipes
manifold
. In my opinion, I agree that number of
present
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options have now increased
dramatically but
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dramatically, but
it depends on the
field
in which
one
is looking for the options. To find a specific choice is always desired but rarely
found but
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found, but
in the present age the horizon of possibilities has really broadened. In the
field
of education and pursuing the future career,
one
can have many choices available.
For example
, if a student cannot get the required grades in a particular
field
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field, then
then
it
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does not
mean that he stands nowhere. A number of jobs are
there according
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there, according
to the aptitude and capabilities of the student. Another point to consider regarding the
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one of a number of things from which only one can be chosen
alternatives
is in the
field
of automobiles.
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At
the present time, moving from
one
place to another is not a big consideration. It all depends upon the finances and the possibilities can be many and that too very
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cost effective
.
For instance
, if
one
wants to own a car, it can be very easily afforded on
installments
a payment of part of a debt; usually paid at regular intervals
instalments
instruments
instalments'
these days.
Moreover
, public transport sector is so well developed that day to day routine can be carried out in a very efficient way even without owning a car.
Finally
, the most important issue with a vast majority of possibilities is the
field
of communication. To remain connected with the world is of prime importance in the present era and at the same time it has become so
convinient
suited to your comfort or purpose or needs
convenient
that we can communicate with
eachother
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each other
by literally spending nothing by using modalities
such
as
e-mail
(computer science) a system of world-wide electronic communication in which a computer user can compose a message at one terminal that can be regenerated at the recipient's terminal when the recipient logs in
email
,
facebook
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Facebook
and twitter. In conclusion,
this
is the age of technology and with each passing day man has an increased number of options available to him that decision making is becoming easier.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • overwhelmed
  • decision fatigue
  • paralysis by analysis
  • consumerism
  • globalization
  • personal autonomy
  • market saturation
  • option overload
  • decision-making process
  • psychological well-being
  • buyer's remorse
  • customization
  • trade-offs
  • minimalism
  • information superhighway
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