Some people believe that the best way to control accidents on city streets is to lower the speed limit, but others think there are better ways to improve the safety on city streets. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Everything has two sides and
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is not an exception. In the
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children, but today many people criticize it. We must acknowledge that
parents
know their children best. That gives them a good chance of knowing how to make
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understand certain concepts. Using
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process of learning more enjoyable and effective.
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feel safe, which contributes to his ability to concentrate on studying.
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, many people believe that teaching should be done by professionals. There are many proven scientific approaches that produce good results and without those
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parents
who teach their kids at
home
have no chance of success. Associative learning is a good example of
such
a technique. Showing the
child
images
while
learning the alphabet (apple for “a”, boy for “b”) makes him or her remember the letters faster and easier.
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not every parent is capable of teaching his or her
child
at
home
because the blind can not lead the blind.
Parents
can not teach the children something they don’t know themselves, and let’s face it – not all of us have profound knowledge of history or geography even on a school textbook level. Eventually, even those mums and dads who had succeeded at school could forget the material as
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time went by. In conclusion, I have more trust in
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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