Some people say that protecting the environment is the government’s responsibility. Others believe that every individual should take responsibility for it. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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A highly controversial issues today relates to some people think that only

government

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should save our

environment

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while others believe that

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it is

it's

all of our business.

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this

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essay

refers to the speaker or writer

'm going to examine

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question from both points of view and

then

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give my own opinion on the matter. On the one hand

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nowdays

the period of time that is happening now; any continuous stretch of time including the moment of speech

nowadays

our

environment

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day by day going to the damaging.That’s why

protect

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protecting

our

environment

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is very essential for human being.It is our duty to save our orbit.

every

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Every

people

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person

should follow all of rules and regulation for protecting our planet.

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for

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example people should

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example, people should

avoid

plastic product

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the plastic product

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and use dustbin

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as well as tree plantation is necessary for our

environment

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Also

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try to use

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environment

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environmentally

friendly product

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although

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we haven’t enough orbit friendly manufacturer.But we have to try

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for making

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environment

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environmentally

friendly product.

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our

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Our

government

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should take good

discission

an extended communication (often interactive) dealing with some particular topic

discussion

decisions

decision

for helping our

environment

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for becoming healthy and fresh planet.

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addition our

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addition, our

government

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should encourage their people

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follow rules and protecting our orbit.

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for

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For

instance if

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instance, if

our

government

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arrange tree plantation campaign or arrange city cleaning campaign that time people attending

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campaign and they help to save to

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environment

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the environment

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additionally if

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our

government

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make

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makes

cautionary

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two times

twice

that time people will be careful.

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also our

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Also, our

Also our

government

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should

making

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make

new law

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a new law

for who cut trees and who doing bad job which one make

bad influence

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a bad influence

in our

environment

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. To sum up

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in my opinion

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a good

environment

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and a cake of piece fresh air is our happiness.

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That's

why

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the thing named or in question

all of our responsibility and we have to

try protect our

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try to protect our

planet.

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