Some people say that protecting the environment is the government’s responsibility. Others believe that every individual should take responsibility for it. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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A highly controversial issues today relates to some people think that only

government

should save our

environment

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while others believe that

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it is

it's

all of our business.

However

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this

essay

refers to the speaker or writer

'm going to examine

this

question from both points of view and

then

give my own opinion on the matter. On the one hand

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nowdays

the period of time that is happening now; any continuous stretch of time including the moment of speech

nowadays

our

environment

day by day going to the damaging.That’s why

protect

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protecting

our

environment

is very essential for human being.It is our duty to save our orbit.

every

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Every

people

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person

should follow all of rules and regulation for protecting our planet.

for

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For

example people should

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example, people should

avoid

plastic product

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the plastic product

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and use dustbin

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as well as tree plantation is necessary for our

environment

Also

try to use

environment

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environmentally

friendly product

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although

we haven’t enough orbit friendly manufacturer.But we have to try

this

for making

environment

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environmentally

friendly product.

On the other hand

our

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Our

government

should take good

discission

an extended communication (often interactive) dealing with some particular topic

discussion

decisions

decision

for helping our

environment

for becoming healthy and fresh planet.

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addition our

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addition, our

government

should encourage their people

for

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follow rules and protecting our orbit.

for

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For

instance if

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instance, if

our

government

arrange tree plantation campaign or arrange city cleaning campaign that time people attending

this

campaign and they help to save to

environment

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the environment

additionally if

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Additionally, if

Additionally if

our

government

make

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makes

cautionary

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two times

twice

that time people will be careful.

also our

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Also, our

Also our

government

should

making

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make

new law

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a new law

for who cut trees and who doing bad job which one make

bad influence

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a bad influence

in our

environment

. To sum up

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in my opinion

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a good

environment

and a cake of piece fresh air is our happiness.

that's

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That's

why

its

the thing named or in question

all of our responsibility and we have to

try protect our

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try to protect our

planet.

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