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Some people believe that unpaid community service should be a compulsory part of high school programmes ( for example working for a charity, improving the neighborhood or teaching sports to younger children) To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Helping others without any conditions or return in general improve our social atmosphere with great
hormony
compatibility in opinion and action
harmony
harmonies
 among all age groups. High
school
 teen-ager facing and learning many different changes in life.
This
 is generally best
time
 to teach them how by charity or to be helpful to others without any wants creates
positive environment
Suggestion
a positive environment
 and
piece
the state prevailing during the absence of war
peace
 of mind with happiness on everyone faces.
Teen age
Suggestion
Teenage
time
 of students during high
school
 consider to be
right
Suggestion
the right time
time
 to inculcate values of good civilian. High
school
 students can know the value of societal
arrangment
the thing arranged or agreed to
arrangement
arrangements
. One
always try
Suggestion
always tries
 to give back to society whenever
time
 required for that like during natural calamities, by helpful to older citizens, by helpful to younger kids for learning new skills of life. These all things will create
better future
Suggestion
a better future
 of society as well as of
country
Suggestion
the country
. Happiness comes from inside of a person when one help the others in need. Free education services by high
school
 students can teach them teaching and help younger kids to interact better with their seniors.

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