Some people say that the best way to improve public health is by increasing the number of sports facilities. Others, however, say that this would have little effect on public health and that other measures are required. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Some would argue that

the better

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the best

means to improve citizen’s

health

is through providing more sports facilities while others say that there is a requirement of other solutions because that would affect less on public

health

.

Although

sports facilities are

good way

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a good way

to change public

health

, I believe that it is better to implement other measures. On the

one

hand, implementing

more number

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a number

number

of sports facilities the citizens can easily access to

nearest sports area

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the nearest sports area

and

de

engage in

do

the

exercises and other physical activities. People will become strengthens physically and tend to participate in different kinds of sports which

ultimately

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Ultimately

help the nation.

For example

, there are 70% of peoples said that they don’t do exercise because of lack of facilities in their areas reported by

one

survey in India.

However

, I believe that

this

does not mean that the

health

ratio will increase because it only affects

physically

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Physically

and there are other criteria which should be included.

On the other hand

, providing more sports facilities will help to improve physical

health

which fulfils only

one

criteria to improve

health

completely. The

diet

is

also

major factor

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a major factor

in improvement because it

affect

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affects

inside of the body parts and improving them. If a person does exercise only and not concentrate on

diet

than

there

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they're

not any chance to improve particular’s

health

in an effective way because whatever he or she eat are more important to improve

health

a healthy state of wellbeing free from disease

Health

.

For example

, there are 90% of the gym trainers said physical exercise and

diet

are base to improve

health

in

one

article

of

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in

the newspaper. I believe that

this

factor is as mandatory as sports facilities because without it there will be no change in actual

health

. In conclusion, while rising up sports facilities give

one

aspect to improve

health

, the

diet

is

also

major factor

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a major factor

to consider because it improves inside part of the body.