You have decided to leave your current employment. Write a letter to your employer. Include the following in your letter: - Explain why you are writing - Explain why you have decided to leave the company - Tell your employer what you plan to do after leaving your present employment

Dear Sir, I’m writing to you to inform you that I would like to resign from my position as Team Leader from your company. I had a wonderful experience here with the Jaypee family, but somehow I and my mom have decided to shift to Canada so have to leave

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job within a month. I applied for the Permanent Residency in Canada and

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I got the chance to shift there. I was preparing for the IELTS exam for a very long time and now my hard work has paid off now. After shifting to Canada I’ll be searching for a new job as our new life will begin. I’ll be leaving after giving my 1

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notice period. I’ll put my best efforts

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month of the company and will be needing your blessings so that I can have a better life there. Yours Faithfully Vaishali

vaishalibhardwaj2010

Sep 2, 2019

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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

6 paragraphs

150 words

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You have decided to leave your current employment. Write a letter to your employer. Include the following in your letter: - Explain why you are writing - Explain why you have decided to leave the company - Tell your employer what you plan to do after leaving your present employment

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

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