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Essay topics: Learning English at school is often seen as more important than learning local languages. If these are not taught many are at risk of dying out. In your opinion , is it important for everyone to learn English? Should we try to ensure the survival of local language and so, how?

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The table projects the consumption of five major types of fast food eaten in Melbourne. The data is calculated over the
time
 period of 2005 to 2025. Hamburgers dominated in high numbers during 2005 closely followed by fried chicken.
Although
, they have taken a slight dip in present
time
. They are expected to rise in numbers by 2025. Fried chicken keeps up with the hamburgers in close competition. They are expected to maintain the steady growth in numbers. Salads had a slow start in terms of consumption. But it presents with an accelerated growth over
time
. Salads expected to be
in
Suggestion
on
 par with hamburgers and fried chicken by 2025 as they are calculated to double their numbers in
foreseen future
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the foreseen future
. At
last
, both fried rice and noodles had the identical head start in 2005, with the former slightly edging over the latter in
present
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the present time period
time
 period. In conclusion, both food items are predicted to be
in
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at
on
 the same level by 2025
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