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Some film companies spend millions of dollars on the production of a single movie. Is it necessary to spend a lot of money to make a good movie? What factors contribute to the success of a movie?

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Some
movie
 production firms invest a large sum in the production of blockbusters. A low budget
film
 can be
profitable
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profitable, hence
hence
; money is not the main factor in
film
 production. The perfect story line and characters are the key factors for commercial success of
feature
Suggestion
the feature film
feature films
a feature film
film
. It is possible to make a successful
film
 at minimum cost. Cinema should have
potential
Suggestion
the potential
 to attract audiences. A good script, well written characters and good location are essential to produce a strong
movie
. If
film
Suggestion
the film
 has a strong story with perfect cinematography
then
 it results in the success at the box office. Many horror thrillers are produced at
micro- budget
Suggestion
a micro - budget
.
For example
, The Conjuring was produced
with
Suggestion
by
 new
actors but
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actors, but
 it was an academy award winner
movie
.
Films ability
Suggestion
The film's ability
Film's ability
 to engage and entertain viewers is the major thing needs to be considered.
In other words
, it has to connect with their fears, aspirations or beliefs in some way. A
movie
 should
shows
Suggestion
show
 extraordinary courage of
actor
Suggestion
actors
an actor
 in an unusual circumstance. Star – power is not necessary as people come to
theatre
Suggestion
the theatre
 to be thrilled not to watch a celebrity.
For instance
,
movie
 like Inception showed a new concept of dreams in an effective way. In conclusion, independent filmmakers can make low-cost but critically acclaimed films if the plot and characterization are exceptional.
Nevertheless
, major
film
 studios often rely on star power and special effects to achieve commercial success and
this
 recipe has more often than not led to acclaim within the industry and financial rewards.
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