*QUESTION* There is an increasing trend around the world to have a small family rather than a large family. *Do the advantages* of having a small family rather than a large family *outweighs* *the disadvantages ?*

The population of the world is rising and
its
it is
it's
a
concern specially
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concern, especially
concern especially
for
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in
cities where
population density
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the population density
is very high.
Now a days
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Nowadays
, most people choose to have
small family
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small families
a small family
. But is it really a good idea?
This
essay will discuss the advantages and disadvantages of having a small family. There are two main advantages of having a small family.
Firstly
, since in a small family, number of members are less it is easy to manage.
For instance
, having a single child both parents can switch duties in order to take care of the kids.
Secondly
, the cost of maintaining a small family is less.
For example
, the expenses of kids in school's are very high in cities.
Thus
, a small family is easily
managable
capable of being managed or controlled
manageable
and budget friendly.
However
, there are certain disadvantages of
nuclear family
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the nuclear family
nuclear families
. The primary disadvantage of not having
large family
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a large family
large families
is that the kids behaviour and social skills are not developed due to less people to interact with at home. A recent scientific study shows that juveniles in nuclear family are more introverts than in joint family.
Thus
a nuclear family will have
impact
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an impact
on
childs
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child's
childish
nature. To
summerize
give a summary (of)
summarize
summarise
, there are both advantages and disadvantages of having a small family.
However
, in my
opnion
a personal belief or judgment that is not founded on proof or certainty
opinion
the pros of having a nuclear family
outweighs
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outweigh
the cons.

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