QUESTION There is an increasing trend around the world to have a small family rather than a large family. Do the advantages of having a small family rather than a large family outweighs the disadvantages ?

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The population of the world is rising and

its

it is

it's

concern specially

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concern, especially

concern especially

for

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cities where

population density

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the population density

is very high.

Now a days

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Nowadays

, most people choose to have

small family

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small families

a small family

. But is it really a good idea?

This

essay will discuss the advantages and disadvantages of having a small family. There are two main advantages of having a small family.

Firstly

, since in a small family, number of members are less it is easy to manage.

For instance

, having a single child both parents can switch duties in order to take care of the kids.

Secondly

, the cost of maintaining a small family is less.

For example

, the expenses of kids in school's are very high in cities.

Thus

, a small family is easily

managable

capable of being managed or controlled

manageable

and budget friendly.

However

, there are certain disadvantages of

nuclear family

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the nuclear family

nuclear families

. The primary disadvantage of not having

large family

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a large family

large families

is that the kids behaviour and social skills are not developed due to less people to interact with at home. A recent scientific study shows that juveniles in nuclear family are more introverts than in joint family.

Thus

a nuclear family will have

impact

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an impact

childs

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child's

childish

nature. To

summerize

give a summary (of)

summarize

summarise

, there are both advantages and disadvantages of having a small family.

However

, in my

opnion

a personal belief or judgment that is not founded on proof or certainty

opinion

the pros of having a nuclear family

outweighs

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outweigh

the cons.

Tue Sep 03 2019

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*QUESTION* There is an increasing trend around the world to have a small family rather than a large family. *Do the advantages* of having a small family rather than a large family *outweighs* *the disadvantages ?*

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QUESTION There is an increasing trend around the world to have a small family rather than a large family. Do the advantages of having a small family rather than a large family outweighs the disadvantages ?