There have been some problems with the bus servicing, especially its reliability, in your area over the last two weeks. Write a letter to the manager of the bus company, in your letter: Describe what the problems are Explain how these problems are affecting you Suggest what you would like the company to do
Dear Sir
I am writing
this
letter to bring to your notice that your Linking Words
bus
that shuttles between Aka road and Abak road at a service route for residents in Power City Estate has really been disappointing us for the past two weeks.
It is with great displeasure that I bring to your notice the tension and delay your transportation system had caused me. For over two weeks, it is annoying that your Use synonyms
driver
arrives Use synonyms
the
Change preposition
at the
bus
stop very late. Not only that, every morning, he will never cease to stop by the filling station to buy fuel, which ends up spending quality time on a spot because the queue is always unspeakable early hours of the day. Use synonyms
For example
, yesterday your Linking Words
driver
arrive Use synonyms
the
Change preposition
at the
bus
stop Use synonyms
exactly
8:45am.
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at exactly
Consequently
, Linking Words
this
attitude of your Linking Words
driver
is beginning to affect the trust I have for your service. Use synonyms
This
is because I cannot imagine waking up as early as 5:30am and get to the office by 10am. It is unacceptable and against our company ethics. Linking Words
In addition
, my Linking Words
last
month salary was not complete because of my lateness to work which is caused the quality time spend at the fuel station. Linking Words
For example
, my Linking Words
last
month salary was not complete because of my lateness to work.
There are ways Linking Words
this
challenge can be managed in order to provide quality service to the people. Little carelessness of the Linking Words
driver
and destroy the reputation other transport company have not been able to attend. Use synonyms
Firstly
, I will advise that there should be an attendance book at the Linking Words
bus
stop for the drive to sign his arrival and departure date that will keep him in check. Use synonyms
Secondly
, your drivers should learn to fill the vehicle’s tanks in the night against the Linking Words
next
morning to ensure her passengers are early at work.
I hope my letter will be looked into and as well given a due consideration. Thanks in anticipation.
Yours Faithfully
Njokuocha JohnLinking Words
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite