Countries with a long average working time are more economically successful than those countries which do not have a long working time. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is often argued that countries with lengthened working hours are more economically progressive than countries with a shorter period

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I completely agree with

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opinion and think that nations with limited work hours are less accomplished and more predisposed to various ill vices

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of all, I believe that a long work

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enhances profit and

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growth of industries. Working for a longer period of

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means that more task will be completed and

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goals and objectives would be met within a shorter

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frame which is tantamount to financial growth and

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economic developments.

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, a recent research revealed over 20% surge in the GDP of a country where the federal government had extended the working period of its workers.

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,

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means that less attention is paid to social vices

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as stealing, cultism, drug abuse, sexual abuse.Having a lot of work to do will definitely leave no

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for unhealthy behaviours that are against the morality of the

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society, therefore

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, a drastic decrease in the social menace inherent in a country. As reported recently, a certain community was able to cut down the menace of stealing when it engaged the youth in a community development program and extended its activities

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. In conclusion, Nations with longer working hours are wealthier and promising than countries with shorter hours because of the extra income earned as well as a reduction in social vices

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It is

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recommended that countries embrace

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method of working for a richer and safer environment.