You regularly attend meetings where many people who belong to different countries take part. You have met people of a large number of countriesand have had a wide experience of them. Write a letter to the editor of a local newspaper. In your letter · Why you attend such meetings · What activities are being done in such meetings · How this information can be useful to the people of your country
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Dear sir,
I am Hiren Chauhan. I am writing
this
letter to draw your attention towards
a forum where I regularly take part in. I am studying in an Australian Change preposition
to
University
, where Correct your spelling
university
this
open platform is provided to the student coming from different countries. Also
I gain lots of information which is so helpful to me and other Add a comma
,Also
students
.
This
forum meets every 2 months and students
from different countries discuss about
their needs and the places they are coming from. Remove the preposition
apply
In addition
, Many alumni students
are also
being called, so, they can impart us
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apply
the
information about Correct article usage
apply
study
, work and settling in Australia. As Add an article
the study
this
event is organized by the students
’ union, they also
answer some of our questions related to university affairs and always ask if anyone needs their help in that area. All in all, the event is handful
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a handful
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of source
source
of Fix the agreement mistake
sources
solution
to problems all Fix the agreement mistake
solutions
students
are facing, especially newcomers.
Thus
, I strongly believe that this
information will be very helpful to the people as so many people are moving to Australia for study or work purposes. Moreover
, I am sending you the complete article which you can publish and people willing to come to Australia will surely be benefited by
it.
Yours faithfully,
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from
kiran
Change the capitalization
Kiran
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite