You regularly attend meetings where many people who belong to different countries take part. You have met people of a large number of countriesand have had a wide experience of them. Write a letter to the editor of a local newspaper. In your letter · Why you attend such meetings · What activities are being done in such meetings · How this information can be useful to the people of your country

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Dear sir, I am Hiren Chauhan. I am writing

this

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letter to draw your attention

towards

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a forum where I regularly take part in. I am studying in an Australian

University

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, where

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open platform is provided to the student coming from different countries.

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Also

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I gain lots of information which is so helpful to me and other

students

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forum meets every 2 months and

students

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from different countries discuss

about

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their needs and the places they are coming from.

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, Many alumni

students

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are

also

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being called, so, they can impart

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the

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information about

study

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, work and settling in Australia. As

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event is organized by the

students

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’ union, they

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answer some of our questions related to university affairs and always ask if anyone needs their help in that area. All in all, the event is

handful

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of source

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source

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solution

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to problems all

students

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are facing, especially newcomers.

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, I strongly believe that

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information will be very helpful to the people as so many people are moving to Australia for study or work purposes.

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, I am sending you the complete article which you can publish and people willing to come to Australia will surely be benefited

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it. Yours faithfully,

kiran

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

firstly
secondly
thirdly
in additional
moreover
also
for example
for instance
therefore
however
although
even though
despite

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
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Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

6 paragraphs

208 words

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