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Some people think that high salary is important when choosing a company to work for, while others think that good working atmosphere is more important. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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Higher salary or friendly working environment, a very good dilemma indeed! Both have their own set of pros and cons. In
this
 essay, I would like
give
Suggestion
to give
 my point of view on both these essential points and summarize with my opinion. Higher remuneration is always a plus point,
infact
communicate a disease to
infect
infarct
 major job switches are due to attraction of
better salary
Suggestion
a better salary
. Higher pay packages have major plus points
such
 as ability to afford
better standard
Suggestion
a better standard
 of life, luxurious amenities, feeling of satisfaction.
On the other hand
, a friendly working space is
also
 very essential. "Peace of mind" a very important factor and necessary for human beings. If the working atmosphere is very rigid or not
accomodating
helpful in bringing about a harmonious adaptation
accommodating
 to
needs
Suggestion
the needs
 of the people working there, each working day becomes a big problem. The desire and enthusiasm to work isn't there any more.
Thus
, again creating a major feeling of dissatisfaction and resulting in decline of work efficiency. Stating the importance of both scenarios, I would like to go for better remuneration package and don't mind compromising with the rigid rules if there are any. I am a very extrovert person and have never had an issue making friends, so I do have a very tough set of colleagues to please, I would take that as a challenge and enjoy making a
break through
a productive insight
breakthrough
.
Also
, I have never had a problem with obeying rules, given my strict Indian background while growing up.
Infact
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In fact
, I have come to appreciate rules and find them necessary. To sum up, better salary is an important criteria for me while choosing and selecting work opportunities.
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