1.B. Nowadays, people are spending increasingly large amounts of money on their marriage parties. Many people feel large and expensive weddings cause problems for the bride and groom. Do you agree? Use personal examples in your response.

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These days, it is common to see people spend lavishly on
thier
of them or themselves
their
nuptial parties, some individuals think that extravagant weddings can put the couples in difficult situations. In my opinion
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completely agree that large, expensive holy matrimony can cause a stain to the newly wedded
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, large weddings are usually very expensive, sometimes causing debts and financial strain on the couple.Particularly, when the families are not around to support the couple financially and they are not able to plan within their budget
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Thereby
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making them borrow and run into debts.
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, life after marriage becomes really hard as they struggle to pay back money owed and survive.
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, if not properly managed can drift them apart.
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in my neighbourhood, a newly wedded wife had filed for divorce
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citing that the husband was lazy and
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After they ran into debts from a big society wedding). Another point to consider is the tension of planning a big nuptial
ceremony which
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ceremony, which
can be daunting and exhausting.
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,
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believe holy matrimony should be a solemn activity as married life begins after the wedding
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'it is only a day
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, so many
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couples
put a lot into planning and forgetting about the marriage itself. It is only expected that most times after the big event
most newly weds
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most newly wed
break down physically, emotionally and psychologically from the stress of planning for the event. Recently
i
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I
attended a party and witnessed how a bride fainted at the reception due to the rigorous strain she went through planning for the party. In conclusion
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to avoid
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stress and staying indebted it is important to keep away from lavish nuptials and plan a small one within means. It is
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recommended that intending couples plan adequately for their married life as against marriage rites which is just a day event. Thank you.
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