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The system used for rubbish/garbage collection in your local area is not working properly. This is causing problems for you and your neighbours. Write a letter to the local council. In your letter: – Describe how the rubbish collection system is not working properly – Explain how this is affecting you and your neighbours – Suggest what should be done about the problem

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Dear Sir or Madam,
This
 writing is the common pledge by the local residents of the surrey. The reason is
for
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the disappointment about the heap of
garbage
 prevailing on the side roads.
Firstly
,
with
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 the increase in
rate
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 of household
garbage
 and other public
waste
 has caused a worrying challenge.Because of the inconvenient timings of local
garbage
 contractors. Due to
irregularity
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 of collectors, tons of
waste
thrown
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are thrown
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 outside as there is no chance of keeping it at home for a long duration.
Secondly
, due to the insufficient
garbage
 bins for the organic and recyclable
waste
, a mix of
waste
 often taken out on the pavements and
sideof
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side of
sides of
 the roads which
has
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 caused ill effects of
disease
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the disease
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such
 as
diarrhea
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, typhoid and so on. The children are the main targets and they mostly play outside for entertainment.
Moreover
, a number of people have been transferred
tothe
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to the
 hospital who were having breathing problems.
Lastly
, I would suggest
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you
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that there is an urgent need
of
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for
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garbage
collector
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collectors
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 regularly twice a week as well as scrutinized by the local officials.The pragmatic approach
taen
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taken
 by local officials would make
city
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 keep clean and green. I shall look forward
towards
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the
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favorable
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 response. Yours
faithfuly
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faithfully
,
jasmeen
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jasmine
Yasmeen
kaur
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The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

  • Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

  • Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

  • Best regards,
  • Warm wishes,

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • rubbish collection schedule
  • overflow
  • accumulation
  • attracts pests
  • health hazards
  • unsightly appearance
  • foul odors
  • quality of life
  • reliable
  • frequent
  • community awareness programs
  • waste reduction
  • recycling
  • community composting solutions
  • organic waste
  • installation
  • public bins
  • strategic locations
  • littering
  • residential bins
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