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Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

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Some people say that
music
 is one of the excellent tools to make people closer even though they are different in cultures, ages and languages.
However
, some people think that it does not close the gap between people. In
this
 essay I will give my opinion regard to the statement.
First
 of all, I personally do not think that piece can close the gap between people.
This
 is because people have different tastes and preferences.
For example
, elderly people like to listen to their genre of
music
, they
also
 annoyed by the modern piece
such
 as pop musics produced by many artists like Taylor Swift, Katy Perry and etc.
In contrast
, people in these days listen to different kind of
music
. So, I personally feel like song cannot bring people closer to each other. Another reason is that it can
also
 cause some conflict between people.
For instance
, copyright, which is a serious problem that always occur in the
music
 industries.
However
, I think it can
also
 reduce the diversity between people even though they have different cultures.
For instance
, Japan and Korea, they both have different kind of
music
, but there are
also
 some similarities so they decided to collaborate and produce the program called Produce48.
This
 program is very famous and popular across Asian countries. With
this
 example I think it is possible that
music
 can bring people closer.
Nonetheless
,
music
 can either close the gap of people or create a conflict between them, but I somehow feel like
music
 can potentially help people to understand each others.
Music
 is a universal language, people can enjoy it without the need to understand the lyrics. They can appreciate the
rhytms
the basic rhythmic unit in a piece of music
rhythms
 and melodies. The beauty of
music
 can help people to become closer. To conclude,
music
 is a good tool for people to be close to each others, regardless
to
Suggestion
of
 who is the owner of
music
Suggestion
the music
a music
.
However
, it might
also
 cause some conflicts to certain groups of people, especially when it comes to copyright.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • universal language
  • evoke
  • connect
  • diverse audiences
  • cultural exchange
  • generational gaps
  • shared experiences
  • unifying force
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