Some people believe that a gap year between school and university is a good idea, while others disagree strongly. Consider both sides of this debate and present your own opinion. You should give reasons for your answer, and include ideas and examples from your own knowledge and experience. Write at least 250 words

An year
gap
between
school
and university is considered a good idea by some people while others think it
otherwise
. While both the views have their own pros and cons, I agree
to
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with
the latter point of view.
This
essay will focus on both the views and conclude with my opinion.
Firstly
, those who recommend taking a
gap
after
school
believe that
this
would be a good break for a child to focus and prepare well for the competitive exams required to get into a good university.
For example
, some of my friends dropped a year and studied for the medical entrance test to get into a good college. They prepared
well focusing
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well, focusing
entirely on the purpose of cracking the exam.
As a result
, they scored good marks and got into the college of their interest due to hard work and quality time given to their preparation.
On the contrary
, people who believe that it is not a good idea to take a years' break after
school
have their own views. According to them, children who take a
gap
fall behind to their classmates and some of them go into depression.
For example
, some of the friends who took a
gap
was not able to score good marks and was confused about the
next
step so he decided to end his
life
because of the stress his mind was facing.
Also
, many teenagers cannot study the whole day, a lot of their precious time is wasted in doing irrelevant stuff and
also
get bored. While others who get into universities, start a new phase of their
life
and gain more experience. A lot of these children become
target
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the target
targets
of
critisism
disapproval expressed by pointing out faults or shortcomings
criticism
and failure. As a conclusion, I would like to say that it is better not to take a year
gap
between
school
and university as there are so many
opportuinites
a possibility due to a favorable combination of circumstances
opportunities
one can grasp if there is a change in the phase of
life
. Every step has a new experience and exposure waiting on its way. Dream bigger, focus on yourselves and think about different options in
life
.
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