Some people believe that a gap year between school and university is a good idea, while others disagree strongly. Consider both sides of this debate and present your own opinion. You should give reasons for your answer, and include ideas and examples from your own knowledge and experience. Write at least 250 words
An year
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would be a good break for a child to focus and prepare well for the competitive exams required to get into a good university. Linking Words
For example
, some of my friends dropped a year and studied for the medical entrance test to get into a good college. They prepared Linking Words
well focusing
entirely on the purpose of cracking the exam. Suggestion
well, focusing
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, they scored good marks and got into the college of their interest due to hard work and quality time given to their preparation.
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On the contrary
, people who believe that it is not a good idea to take a years' break after Linking Words
school
have their own views. According to them, children who take a Use synonyms
gap
fall behind to their classmates and some of them go into depression. Use synonyms
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step so he decided to end his Linking Words
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because of the stress his mind was facing. Use synonyms
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, many teenagers cannot study the whole day, a lot of their precious time is wasted in doing irrelevant stuff and Linking Words
also
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. Every step has a new experience and exposure waiting on its way. Dream bigger, focus on yourselves and think about different options in Use synonyms
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