Some people say that advertising encourages us to buy things we don't really need. Others say that advertisements tells us about new products that may improve our lives. Which viewpoint do you agree with?
Many persons
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that assert or affirm strongly; state to be true or existing
claimed
advertisingment
are fourcing
to Suggestion
forced
forcing
forking
fusing
purchase
new product but
they Accept comma addition
product, but
didn't really required
, same time others believe that endorsement are Suggestion
didn't really require
haven't really required
inform
us to the Suggestion
informing
iteam
that will a distinct part that can be specified separately in a group of things that could be enumerated on a list
item
team
impove
the life style. I will agree with how broadcast to make better
improve
things forcesing
to buy the device.
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things, fixing
things fixing
Firstly
, as a globalization many
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globalization, many
commerical
things are displayed in everywhere like internetconnected with or engaged in or sponsored by or used in commerce or commercial enterprises
commercial
comical
,
TV and Newspapers Accept space
,
hence
who ever
is following these things they are automatically attracted whatever person
whoever
with
them same time the product owners are given many offers like buy Suggestion
to
one
and get another free therefore
the common citizens are planning to purchase
the item because they getting another one
is free. Moreover
, for marketing this
goods they will use for famous persons like cinema star or plural of "this"
these
sports man
someone who engages in sports
sportsman
then
easily reach to younger auidence
due to they will invest more amount a gathering of spectators or listeners at a (usually public) performance
audiences
on
Suggestion
of
this
items
Suggestion
item
,
once it reaches to them, Accept space
,
therefore
public thought that celebraties
a widely known person
celebrities
also
using this products
and planning to Suggestion
this product
these products
purchase
them. For Example
in India before 2000 year their
is no beauty products in or at that place
there
market but
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market, but
one
commerical
ads are connected with or engaged in or sponsored by or used in commerce or commercial enterprises
commercial
started
all the beauty Suggestion
starting
products
sales are Suggestion
product
increased
due to most of the items are published by top hero and heroines and now Suggestion
increasing
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a republic in the Asian subcontinent in southern Asia; second most populous country in the world; achieved independence from the United Kingdom in 1947
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serving an esthetic rather than a useful purpose
cosmetic
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market
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, many Suggestion
other hand
Youngstars
Suggestion
Young stars
are believe
that these promotions Suggestion
believe
are impove
their Suggestion
are improving
are improve
have improved
lifes
like showing in the a characteristic state or mode of living
lives
life
advertesment
due the products and quality but they a public promotion of some product or service
advertisement
coudn't
could not
couldn't
relize
be fully aware or cognizant of
realize
realise
release
that is
completely fake.
In conclusion, i
strongly believe that refers to the speaker or writer
I
advertisments
will a public promotion of some product or service
advertisements
encourge
to contribute to the progress or growth of
encourage
purchase
the products using with sports stars and famous people in market
and Suggestion
the market
markets
same time
they will give the benefits like Suggestion
the same time
purchase
new items like buy one
and get one
free then
automatically people are intersted
to buy new productions based on the having or showing interest; especially curiosity or fascination or concern
interested
advertisment
.a public promotion of some product or service
advertisement
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