Some people believe that unpaid community service should be a compulsory part of high school programs. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Many people thought that charity
service
should be mandatory in
higer
advanced in complexity or elaboration
higher
Niger
education programs due to students can learn new things in life. I have
completly
to a complete degree or to the full or entire extent
completely
agree
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agreed
with statement why unpaid work is part of high school programs.
Firstly
,
Now a days
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Nowadays
the young generation is so busy with their personal and professional
work
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work, hence
hence
they don't have
time
to think about
others
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others, therefore
therefore
many human touch services like old age and child care
activites
any specific behavior
activities
activists
are too costly for
this
to overcome every one should learn unpaid work from their
childhood
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childhood, then
then
automatically get
awarness
having knowledge of
awareness
and same
time
their society will improve, for that each and every higher educational school
this
service
subject should be mandatory for all class henceforth
childerns
can learn value from
childhood
and can serve better to the nation.
Secondly
, same
time
in
schoold
an educational institution
school
while
learing
the cognitive process of acquiring skill or knowledge
learning
wearing
leading
this
service
, they have to conduct field trip
therfore
(used to introduce a logical conclusion) from that fact or reason or as a result
therefore
easily can know the
situvation
the general state of things; the combination of circumstances at a given time
situation
.Do
to
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in
with
this
pratical
concerned with actual use or practice
practical
protocol
sessions
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session
if puppies are
volentary
from their school they
eaisly
with ease ('easy' is sometimes used informally for 'easily')
easily
understand
value
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the value
of others henceforth in their community automatically it will reduce because they are seeing for
this
from their
childhood
.
For Example
in India government schools
are implemented
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are implementing
have implemented
implement
this
program every week some students should contribute funds and
donote
give to a charity or good cause
donate
donated
donates
food to homeless
people
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people, therefore
therefore
some days the
begless
a small short-legged smooth-coated breed of hound
beagles
people are reduced in the society. In conclusion, I have complete
ly ag
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agreed
ree with the stateme
nt childe
rns should learn the community
servi
ce activi
any specific behavior
activities
activists
tes from the
ir
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childhood, therefore
childhood
therefo
re easily
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easily, then
then
can know the society and others valu
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of a thing, of it; possessive form of "it"
its
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time
they bui
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contacts
act with other people,
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