Some people say that advertising encourages us to buy things we don't really need. Others say that advertisements tells us about new products that may improve our lives. Which viewpoint do you agree with? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

#people #advertisements #products #lives

Hope you are doing well. I am writing

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letter to express my appreciation and heartfelt gratitude for the help extended

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17th August when I met with an accident near city centre. My name is

kayal

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Kayal

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and am working as a software engineer in HPE. I came to know that you have sacrificed your time and taken effort to admit me in the nearby hospital. It was a major accident and I might have lost my life if you had not responded promptly. It is because of you, I am alive and getting better.

Although

many people talk about the need to be generous and to help others, we see very few people practicing what they preach. You showed that you are an exception

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your selfless action. People like you make

this

world a much nicer place. We are very eager to meet you and your family to say a big “Thank you” in person. I am inviting you and your family on Sunday 24th August to have Lunch with us. Kindly accept my invite and do visit our home. I look forward to hear from you soon.

Fri Sep 06 2019

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2Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
3Grammar mistakes
 

5 paragraphs

190 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

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encourage
persuade
manipulative
unnecessary
excessive
artificial needs
desires
consumers
oversaturation
impulse buying
financial problems
inform
educate
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benefits
innovations
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