Some say that music, art and drama are as important as other school subjects, especially at primary level. Do you agree or disagree?
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Firstly
, learning to sing or act or paint, gives a child the opportunity to explore their abilities. Linking Words
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non-academic subjects give children the opportunities to perform in front of large audiences, which helps in raising their confidence levels. Linking Words
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, educating children in subjects at the primary level instills Linking Words
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skills for a lifetime. Linking Words
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, my friend who was once very shy learned Linking Words
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confident after he learned to play the piano and started performing in front of audiences. It is not necessary that children would be able to get to a degree exceeding normal or proper limits
too
such
skills from other academic subjects.
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help children the importance of collaboration or working in teams. In most cases these subjects require children to work in groups which teaches an important skill, which is teamwork. Working in teams is an important aspect, as Use synonyms
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would help children to respect the ideas of others and would teach them on how to work along with others. Linking Words
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football team is mainly made up of children from the Use synonyms
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has enabled them to play together as a team and win many leagues.
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subjects must be imparted to children from the primary level as it teaches them on key skills. Confidence and collaboration are vital skills which Linking Words
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite