creative artists should always be given the freedom to express their own ideas in whichever way they wish. there should be no government restrictions on what they do. to what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion

Freedom of expression is the most basic human
right
and according to one school of thought
this
creativity should not be
controlledby
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controlled by
any Government.
This
essay partially agrees with
this
view and provide arguments to support it.
Although
it is a well known fact that every individual in
this
world should have the
right
to express their views in terms of poetry, speeches, paintings or movies etc.
but
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But
when
this
right
is not exercised in a responsible manner
then
it can lead to dissatisfaction and chaos amongst the people.
For instance
, In India there is a famous artist name M.F
Hussain who
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Hussain, who
is a well known painter. He expresses his views by means of beautiful paintings.
Few years
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A few years
back, he painted nude paintings of Hindu God and
Godesses
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Goddesses
Goddess
in the name of modernism.
This
does'nt
does not
doesn't
go well down with the general public who started protesting against the painter. In
this
case the freedom of one person that can hurt the sentiments and emotions of thousands of people should be controlled.
On the other hand
, writers and some religious leaders are banned by
government
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the government
governments
of different countries simply because they are showing the true faces of the Government and some groups
to
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in
the world.
For example
, a well known Bangladeshi writer Taslima Nasreenwas banned and even a Fatwa was issued against her from Muslim countries as she was writing against the Jihadi movement run by some terrorist groups to prove it is good to kill people who does not believe in Islamic views as it is allowed in Islam. Eventually, it can be concluded that the
right
to exercise the freedom of expression has its own pros and cons and it is really hard to decide when and where to control it. Sometimes it is necessary to
heve
have or possess, either in a concrete or an abstract sense
have
restrictions to maintain peace and harmony while at other times it is an ideal approach to make people understand the true
colors
a flag that shows its nationality
colours
behind so called religious groups and patriotic people.
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