nowadays , some people say that private vehicle are convenient for traveling . Discuss both view and given your opinion .

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Today
era, is technical era. In all around the world individuals use many transport vehicles like -private
vehicle
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and public
vehicle
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Some people believe that private transports are beneficial for
traveling
the act of going from one place to another
travelling
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because they can easily stay one to others place
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But some say that these are the many problems
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to discuss
my both views and my opinion in the upcoming
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On the positive side
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others think private
vehicle
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are
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is
good for the
traveling
the act of going from one place to another
travelling
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it is a very easily
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because people can visit any new destination with their own desire.
Secondly
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they save
time
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because private vehicles have a specific
time
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Sometime buses are not good condition and people are not
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visiting
any place.So, that's
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the reason
they like
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they, like
private
vehicle
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On the negative hand
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others say that these are the not beneficial for everyone
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because there are the many problems.
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as the pollution and traffic
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excessive accumulation of blood or other fluid in a body part
congestion
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Because it is a good way
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comparable
by the private
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time many
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time, many
people want to visit
same place
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the same place
and they use the public
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transport
system and
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, there are saving fuel
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as-
dissel
an internal-combustion engine that burns heavy oil
diesel
Diesel
diesels
and petrol etc. People say it is important to embrace public vehicles as they arrives private
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are one of them
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To conclude
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it can be noted that these are many cons and it is some pros. Some people believe private vehicles are good, because these
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the main cause of many pollution and traffic. But I believe that private transport systems are beneficial,
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people stay with own desire and saving
time
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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