Governments should focus spending only on public services, not waste on the arts. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

People believe that it is necessary for governments to focus investing
money
in public services rather than w
aste
serving no useful purpose; having no excuse for being
wasted
on the arts. In my opinion, I disagree with that, I think that a
uthorities
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the authorities
should focus spending
money
on both public services and the arts. On the one hand, governments had better spend a large amount of their budget on public services.
Firstly
, public services are the things
such
as hospitals, schools, roads,
Accept space
which significantly impact on people’s quality of life.
For instance
, unless governments focus investing enough
money
for hospitals, the health of citizens will become worse, and more and more people can die of diseases. O
ther
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Another
example is that if schools are not s
pent
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spending
enough
money
for, children will not be fully educated that leads to their lack of knowledge and culture in the future.
Similarly
, if roads a
re not invested
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are not investing
have not invested
do not invest
don't invest
enough
money
, people will be difficult and dangerous in traffic because of traffic jams, accidents, rough surface of r
oads,
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the roads
On the other hand
, government should not completely neglect the arts.
Firstly
, unless there is governments’ support, art structures will fall into the danger of closing, and many arts institutions could not earn much profits.
Secondly
, when governments invest
money
in the arts, the arts can attract many tourists that results in tourism industry development.
For example
, in Vietnam, g
overnment
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the government
spent a part of budget on preserving historical sites
such
as Hung Pagoda, the old quarter,
Accept space
and supporting
money
for building art structures as museums, t
heaters,
a building where theatrical performances or motion-picture shows can be presented
theatres
entertainment parks,
Accept space
so that there are many people go to visit.
Thirdly
, many people get pleasure and entertain and relax when they go to the arts. To sum up, I think government should note investing
money
not only in public services but
also
in the arts.
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