Many students decide to further their study abroad what are the benefits and drawbacks of studying aboard. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Nowadays, along the rapid development of economy,
study
aboard is a new trend in developing
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developing countries
a developing country
country
. Students, who think study
aboard bring many benefits, faced the competion
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country
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a new language
new languages
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developing
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from outsides, because the world not fit in schools.
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students from wealthier family money
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worked
money
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own feet
Besides
that, languge
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with the ways of studying aboard. Students have to swell known or easily recognized
familiar
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studying or studying online, working team work. All that is
challenging with junior, whom just staring come the university. Sometimes, the food is also
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