Many students decide to further their study abroad what are the benefits and drawbacks of studying aboard. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Nowadays, along the rapid development of economy,
study
aboard is a new trend in d
eveloping
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developing countries
a developing country
country
. Students, who think
study
aboard bring many benefits, faced the c
ompetion
a business relation in which two parties compete to gain customers
competition
with expat. In my mind
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Accept space
:
Everything h
ave
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has
t
o
being one more than one
two
sides,
study
aboard
also
does.” F
ristly,
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Firstly
what the benefits of studying aboard is? Seeing deeper, we can tell studying in local school and studying aboard is d
iffrent.
unlike in nature or quality or form or degree
different
Students, coming from developing
country
,
also
want to
study
in t
he better
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the best
place to get h
igh
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higher
education. Actually, international students can get more advantage when seeking jobs in their
country
.
That is
why many students want to s
tudying
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study
aboard. Studying aboard mean is students can learn n
ew language
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a new language
new languages
besides
mother t
ounge
a mobile mass of muscular tissue covered with mucous membrane and located in the oral cavity
tongue
language, and receive new knowledge. They
also
can travel aboard, or explore the world by their ways. At young a
ges our
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ages in our
thinking cannot stop in c
ircle,
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a circle
circles
because we can get the chance to learn in n
ew enviroment.
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a new environment
new environment
the new environment
new environments
S
peacially,
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Especially
Specially
Spatially
we can l
earning
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learn
from d
eveloped
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developing
country
. Studying not just
study
at schools, students can
study
from outsides, because the world not fit in schools. S
encondly,
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Secondly
the drawbacks of studying aboard stills out there. W
ithing
students from wealthier family
money
is just small things with them, but with students from not well-off family
money
will be a b
igh
above average in size or number or quantity or magnitude or extent
big
thing with them. Students, having w
ork
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worked
part time in their free time, most of whom do not enough
money
to pay school fees. When studying aboard, students have to stand on one’s o
wnfeet.
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own feet
They have to pay for housing, food, school fees if parents cannot support.
Besides
that, l
anguge
a systematic means of communicating by the use of sounds or conventional symbols
language
is the biggest obstacle when they f
rist
preceding all others in time or space or degree
first
time living there. Some
country
they d
o not using
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don't use
do not use
aren't using
are not using
have not used
haven't used
English in educate
that is
obstacle for international students, having a new language from staring. Other problems is students do not f
amilliar
well known or easily recognized
familiar
with the ways of studying aboard. Students have to s
eft
studying or studying online, working team work. All
that is
challenging with junior, whom just staring come the university. Sometimes, the food is
also
challenging with them. Food c
utulre
a particular society at a particular time and place
culture
is d
iffrent
unlike in nature or quality or form or degree
different
and can m
akes
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make
noise when studying aboard. The taste will c
haging,
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change
changing
students will miss their hometown food. The
last
challenge is l
oneless
the state of being alone in solitary isolation
loneliness
and missing home, many students w
ere give
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were given
gave
up so that having to prepare a strongest mind when living in s
trange
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a strange country
country
. In summary, studying aboard have many benefits, but
a
lso have
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also has
drawbacks for students. For me, if having change
also
trying learn the new knowledge from d
eveloped
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developed countries
a developed country
country
. E
xperiances
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Experiences
cannot buy b
y
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with
money
, and
that is
worth for you to try at t
he young
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younger
the younger
the youngest
ages.
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