Air travel can only benefit the richest people in the world. Ordinary people can get no advantage with the development of air travel. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The

last

few decades have seen an enormous growth in

the

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air

travel

. Some

people

claim that only the privileged

people

can make use of

air

travel

whereas

those with a limited budget take no advantage of

this

trend. Personally, I believe that both groups of

people

can reap the benefit of the rising

air

travel

. On the one hand,

air

travel

enables

the

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affluent

people

to have access to faraway destinations for relaxation. Particularly, the well-off

holiday makers

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holidaymakers

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stand a high chance of travelling to exotic and luxurious places to kick back and chill out.

For example

, my neighbour, who is a successful businessman, flew all the way from Hanoi to Abu Dhabi to spend his holiday in the most expensive hotel, called Emirates Palace.

Furthermore

, the expansion of

air

travel

allows wealthy entrepreneurs to expand their business opportunities overseas. In fact, no matter how far a destination is, travelling by plane only takes up a day maximum.

Thus

, many businesses are able to access many markets in various parts of the world, even in rural areas.

On the other hand

, the less well-off

people

can still gain

benefit

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benefits

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from

air

travel

. Specifically,

air

travel

promotes

influx

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an influx

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of goods and services between nations, so that ordinary

people

can afford

high quality

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goods at a reasonable price.

For instance

, tropical fruits

such

as guava, passion fruit and pineapple were very rare and sold at an inflated price in temperate regions.

However

, thanks to the extension of

air

travel

, those fruits are now more affordable for the locals. In conclusion,

this

essay has highlighted the

upside

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upsides

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and

downside

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downsides

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of

the

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booming

air

travel

.

However

, governments should take measures to reduce the

air

pollution that

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air

travel

caused

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.