Some people say that now we can see films in our phones or tablets there is no need to go to the cinema. Others say that to be fully enjoyed, films need to be seen in a cinema. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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Flexibility is the key technology that has offered to us. Nowadays, people can watch movies over their smartphones or tablets,

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of going to the cinema. Whereas, for some it is much more fun to watch cinema in the

theatre

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. In my opinion, both options are a win win situation and it gives chances to everyone to enjoy movies, either sitting at

home

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or at the

movie

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hall.

Firstly

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, I want to mention that watching movies in

theatre

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is really exciting and thrilling. No matter how good data pack or surround sound system you have at

home

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, you cannot get the actual thrilling effect sitting at

home

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, the relaxing environment, those popcorns and the ambience Cinema hall offers, can't be created at

home

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. We need not to worry about food while watching a

movie

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in the

theatre

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. As we can get it at nominal prices in

theatre

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and all we need to do is just relax and enjoy.

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, the other option, of staying at

home

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and to watch movies either on your mobile or smart tablet is not that bad.

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is a popular alternative, amongst lazy people or people who want lazy weekend and still want to watch

movie

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. Sometimes, it is not just about being lazy, but about giving the priority. Like in my case, where I have a 5month old baby and I love watching movies. I just cannot step out of

home

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because I can't take her out for a

movie

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along with me and I cannot keep her alone at

home

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. So,

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is the best solution I have and I must say it works pretty well for me. In the conclusion, it is upon individual to decide whether they prefer to watch movies in the Cinema Hall or at

home

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on their smartphones or tablets, depending upon their priorities and choice.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

309 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

Convenience
Mobile Viewing
Cost-efficient
Time-efficient
Personalized experience
Immersive
Cinematic experience
Surround sound
Collective experience
Technical superiority
Sensory experience
Social hubs
Cultural events
Distractions
Preservation
Filmmaking art
Cinematographic nuances

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