In many countries, people have more health problems because they choose to live an unhealthy lifestyle. What do you think the reasons for this and how can it be solved? Give relevant examples from your experience.

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Living a healthy life and maintaining good
health
should be the goal of a
persons
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person's
life.
However due
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However, due
to
unawareness
of
health
problems and
economical
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economic
situation people tend to lean on unhealthy
lifestyle
.
This
essay will discuss
reason
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reasons
behind
this
issue and offer some feasible solutions. Probably the main cause is the lack of knowledge about the nutritional value of the
food
people are consuming.
This
unawareness
make
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makes
people buy ready made meals which are cheap and time consuming. Due to
this
unawareness
and unwillingness to put effort to make meals for the family people opt for the store bought meals. These foods contain high amount of sodium, saturated fats and harmful preservatives and colour which is detrimental for human
health
. Recently a report published by WHO states that most of the life threatening diseases,
such
as, cancer, diabetes are the direct result of the unhealthy diets over a long period of time. A
further
cause seems to be the sedentary
lifestyle
which
are often associated
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is often associated
with excessive use of technological gadgets. Due to technological advancements people no longer require to do their jobs manually.
This
often leads to
inactive
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an inactive lifestyle
inactive lifestyles
lifestyle
.
Moreover
, the addiction of various social media and mobile phones takes a toll on people’s mental and physical
wellbeing
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well being
. Regarding potential solution, probably the remedy would be to raise awareness about the harmful impact of unhealthy eating habits through advertisements.
For example
, the recent action taken by the government
food
inspection team in Dhaka, which went to certain shops and expose the
food
preparation process in-front of live tv, drop the sale of ready made meals up-to 40% in that week. Another solution may be to build
more recreational center
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a more recreational centre
more recreational centre
more recreational Center
so that people get motivated to participate in various physical activities. In conclusion, it seems that
unawareness
of the
health
risk about fast
food
and lack of physical activities are the key factors behind
this
unhealthy
lifestyle
. Possible solutions would involve awareness among people and encouragement of healthy
lifestyle
.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • sedentary lifestyle
  • technological advancements
  • fast food
  • processed food
  • dietary choices
  • stressful work environments
  • neglect
  • health education
  • consequences
  • advertising
  • health programs
  • active living
  • policies
  • availability
  • nutrition studies
  • conducive environments
  • pedestrian areas
  • media campaigns
  • healthy lifestyle
  • risks
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