The charts below show the number of Japanese tourists traveling abroad between 1985 and 1995 and Australia's share of the Japanese tourist market.
The supplied graphs compare the
number
of Use synonyms
Japanese
Use synonyms
tourists
who travelled Use synonyms
different
countries from 1985 to 1995 and Change preposition
to different
it
Correct pronoun usage
they
also
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give
data on Change the verb form
gives
Australia
's portion of Use synonyms
the
Correct article usage
apply
Japanese
visitors.
Use synonyms
According to
the first bar graph, the Linking Words
number
of Use synonyms
Japanese
Use synonyms
tourists
Use synonyms
visited
abroad Wrong verb form
visiting
had
increased Unnecessary verb
apply
in
each year except for 1991. Change preposition
apply
Initially
, in 1985, around 5 Linking Words
million
Use synonyms
tourists
from Japan travelled abroad and after a decade Use synonyms
this
Linking Words
number
more than trebled. About 2 Use synonyms
million
Use synonyms
Japanese
Use synonyms
tourists
went to Use synonyms
Australia
in 1985. From 1985 Use synonyms
till
1988, the Change preposition
to
number
of Use synonyms
Japanese
Use synonyms
tourists
in Use synonyms
Australia
increased sharply. Beginning from 2 Use synonyms
million
Use synonyms
tourists
in 1985, it reached Use synonyms
to
around 5 Change preposition
apply
million
in 1988. In 1989, the Use synonyms
number
fell slightly but from 90 to 94, the Use synonyms
number
went up. Use synonyms
However
, in 1994 the Linking Words
number
of people who went to Use synonyms
Australia
decreased a bit.
The two graphs represent the steady increase Use synonyms
of
total Change preposition
in
Japanese
Use synonyms
tourists
travelling Use synonyms
different
countries Change preposition
to different
as well as
the Linking Words
number
of Use synonyms
tourists
visiting Use synonyms
Australia
Use synonyms
in Particular
.Linking Words
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