The charts below show the number of Japanese tourists traveling abroad between 1985 and 1995 and Australia's share of the Japanese tourist market.
The supplied graphs compare the
number
of Japanese
tourists
who travelled different
countries from 1985 to 1995 and Change preposition
to different
it
Correct pronoun usage
they
also
give
data on Change the verb form
gives
Australia
's portion of the
Correct article usage
apply
Japanese
visitors.
According to
the first bar graph, the number
of Japanese
tourists
visited
abroad Wrong verb form
visiting
had
increased Unnecessary verb
apply
in
each year except for 1991. Change preposition
apply
Initially
, in 1985, around 5 million
tourists
from Japan travelled abroad and after a decade this
number
more than trebled. About 2 million
Japanese
tourists
went to Australia
in 1985. From 1985 till
1988, the Change preposition
to
number
of Japanese
tourists
in Australia
increased sharply. Beginning from 2 million
tourists
in 1985, it reached to
around 5 Change preposition
apply
million
in 1988. In 1989, the number
fell slightly but from 90 to 94, the number
went up. However
, in 1994 the number
of people who went to Australia
decreased a bit.
The two graphs represent the steady increase of
total Change preposition
in
Japanese
tourists
travelling different
countries Change preposition
to different
as well as
the number
of tourists
visiting Australia
in Particular
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