The graph shows the quantities of goods transported in the Uk between 1974 and 2002 by four different modes of transport

The graph shows the quantities of goods transported in the Uk between 1974 and 2002 by four different modes of transport
The line graph illustrates the volume of commodities delivered in the UK for the period 1974 to 2002 by using four types of transportation conveyance. It is measured by
million
tons
.
Overall
, it can be seen that there was a gradual increase
of
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the
amount
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of consumer goods shipped via road, water and pipeline
while
transport by rail showed a fluctuation trend and
shown
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a slight elevation by the end of 2002. Freight of goods by means of
road
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was constantly higher than the rest of the haulage methods over the period given. Looking at the detail, the volume of goods thru pipeline started at around 5
million
tons
in 1974
,
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and
then
increased remarkably to reach the highest point of almost 25
million
tons
in 2002.
On the other hand
, transportation by water began at 40
million
tons
in 1974, after that it remained steady for the
next
4 years. There was a sharp rise of almost 60 m in 1981 and
to
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level off until the end of 1994. The figure dipped to almost 50 m in 1998,
however
,
after
this
point, the volume increased significantly and reached the peak point
at
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60 m in the
last
year.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Transported goods
  • Quantities
  • Trends
  • Modes of transport
  • Rail
  • Road
  • Water
  • Pipeline
  • Fluctuations
  • Predominance
  • Economic influences
  • Societal changes
  • Technological advancements
  • Environmental impact
  • Growth
  • Steady increase/decrease
  • Comparison
  • Period (e.g., decade, years)
  • Examination
  • Implications
  • Analysis
  • Conclusion
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