Many people believe that international tourism is a bad thing for their countries. What are the reasons for this? What can be done to change this negative attitude towards international tourism?

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A lot of people argue that multinational tourism gives a bad influence on their countries. I believe that there are some reasons which

cause

this

situation

such

tourist

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a tourist

tourists

the tourist

who have bad manner and

cause

problem

with the locals. In my opinion, there are several ways to prevent

this

from happening which can be done by the local people and government. In

this

essay, I will explain about the issues caused by

this

event and some ideas which can be implemented to solve

this

problem

. It is true that international tourism attracts many people to visit an exotic place. Unfortunately,

this

occasion not only gives benefit to

natives

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native

people but

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people, but

also

cause

certain

problem

such

dispute

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a dispute

disputes

with locals because of certain misunderstanding.

This

problem

happens when the visitor does not understand the

natives'

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native

language

and because of

this

reason

cause

them to debate

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with

each others. The

another

not the same one or ones already mentioned or implied

other

reason is

some times

on certain occasions or in certain cases but not always

sometimes

visitor do not respect the people not only their

culture but

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culture, but

also

their certain places

such

beach

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beaches

or sacred temple..

For example

, they often throw the garbage in beach or make vandalism act by make writing

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wall of

temple

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the temple

. In my view, there are some solutions which can be conducted by the natives and local government. The

first

act is the government must make training and education for

natives

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native

people about the

abroad

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abroad, language

language

at least English as

international

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an international language

language

. It is important because

majority

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the majority

tourist

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tourists

understand

this

language

and the mastery of

this

expertise can prevent oral problems. The

action

is, people and

authority

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the authority

must make

preventive and repressive

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a preventive and repressive action

action

to protect certain place.

This

action

can be done by

give

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giving

warning sign and if necessary the officials give

warn

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warning

or fine to visitor who conduct destruction

action

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certain tourist object

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a certain tourist object

Tue Sep 10 2019

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Include an introduction and conclusion

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The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

In conclusion
To conclude
To summarize
Finally
In a nutshell
In general

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Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
4
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Grammar mistakes
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

3 paragraphs

300 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

sustainable tourism
cultural preservation
economic disparity
local communities
environmental impact
overcrowding
infrastructure
responsible tourist
revenue distribution
marketing campaign
community engagement
littering
overuse of resources
cultural appreciation
health risks

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Many people believe that international tourism is a bad thing for their countries. What are the reasons for this? What can be done to change this negative attitude towards international tourism?

Include an introduction and conclusion

Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some people think that the range of technology currently available is increasing the gap between rich people and poor people. Others think that it is causing the opposite effect. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Some experts believe that school it is better for children to begin learning a foreign language at primaryrather than secondary school. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

Fewer and fewer people walk on a daily basis. What are the reasons and how to encourage them to spend their time walking?

Some parents believe that extra private lesson outside school hours, where students work alone with a teach, can help them do better at school. Others disagree. What are the advantages and disadvantages of private tuition? And give your opinion.