Some people believe that it is important to give gifts to friends and family to show that we care about them. Others think that there are better ways to show that we care. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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It's important to make people around you feel special for a healthy
relationship
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. Some people think that giving presents will make them feel loved, while others think that showing mindful gestures is important. I personally believe that material gifts
makes
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make
a
person
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happy at
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,
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however showing
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however, showing
gestures that you
care
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for a
person
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has no comparison with presents. Everyone loves surprises. Surprise in the form of unexpected presents
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is
a good way of showing that you remember them and
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can be done even with a single flower. It
also
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shows that you value the
person
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and think about them.
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, some gifts might not stay with us for long, but they really make you feel special when you receive them.
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, giving gifts to your friends or family
make
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makes
them feel valued and in turn strengthen the
relationship
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.
In contrast
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, there are some people who are of the opinion that there are other ways in which we can show our loved ones that we
care
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about them. Caring and meaningful words or messaging them really
plays
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play
the trick.
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, simple messages like how are you feeling today or asking whether you reached safely to school or work definitely tells the
person
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that you think about them.
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, making a point to understand and fulfilling
needs
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the needs
of your blood ties are an excellent way of taking their
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care
a motor vehicle with four wheels; usually propelled by an internal combustion engine
car
. These gestures come into practice only when the
relationship
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is genuine and
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, I am in favour of giving and receiving love in
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form. All in all, gifts makes an individual feel special and valued as they are bought with love.
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, if the
relationship
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is true,
u
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you
think about that
person
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every single
second
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and show them you
care
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about them by not only sending texts but
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understanding their emotions and supporting them. Later is the kind of
relationship
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that I want to have with people around me.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Tangible symbols
  • Affection
  • Materialism
  • Cultural traditions
  • Impact
  • Relationships
  • Quality time
  • Acts of service
  • Communication
  • Shared experiences
  • Equating
  • Emotional presence
  • Physical presence
  • Material possessions
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