One of the consequences of improved medical care is that people are living longer and life expectancy is increasing. Do you think the advantage of this development outweighs the disadvantages?

Technological advancements in the healthcare sector and modern medical facilities have brought marvels to the world. We have cures for various deadly diseases,

also

able to prevent diseases before infecting in humans.

As a result

, people these days have an increase lifespan, but some people aware of

this

consequence. Personally, I believe that it has more merits than disadvantages.

This

essay will discuss the reason behind

this

idea.

To begin

with, increasing life

expectancy cause

Accept comma addition

expectancy, cause

people to become more active. They have

better diet habit

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a better diet habit

better diet habits

the better diet habit

and exercise schedule that enable them to contribute to the

society

in their old age.

Moreover

,

government

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governments

the government

, in most of countries, has raised the retirement age, so the people in the old age remain as active workforces and are no longer a burden.

For example

, professors, researchers and professionals have a vast experience and could contribute even more than the youngsters that in their respective field. Some people oppose that increasing life expectancy will escalate the senior population and cause the problem to the

society

.

However

, it has benefits rather than drawbacks. Nowadays, the number of working parents is rising and they don’t have time

for

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to

raising their children.

Old

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The older

Older

family members

such

as grandparents will do a

favor

promote over another

favour

by taking most of family burdens.

Finally

, people who we consider no longer useful to the

society

, have gifted us the world we live today with their hard work, tax, money and love. In conclusion,

older population

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the older population

is not a load for us. They

active

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actively

contribute to the

society

. Thanks to the improvement of medical technology that let old people live longer and still enhance our

society