Some people believe that there should be fixes punishment for each type of crime.others, however, argue that the circumstances of an individual crime and the motivation for committing it,should always be taken in to consideration whrm deciding on the punishment
There are debates about the
punishment
which is given for each crime. Some people argue that for each type of criminal act there should be given fixed punishment
. Other people believe that condition and motives should be taken in to
consideration before deciding on the expresses motion to a point on, or within, something
into
punishment
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are
have been
punishment
because it shows justice and fairness to all people. In this
essay, I will explain this
thesis statement with example and logical reason to support this
view.
In my opinion, It is important to give fairness to judge someone
crime. Because of this
reason it is important to consider such
as motivation and background's person
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the background's person
this
criminal action. For example
:
we cannot give Accept space
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punishment
to someone
when he or she stole food because she or he hungry because there is no evil intend in this
action. They do this
deed because they want to survive and they do not have any chance to make sure their survival in this
life. Therefore
, we must give them justice by not give them hard punishment
instead
we must give them any chance to live better by giving them social security.
In conclusion, I believe that each crime must be punish
properly considering some factors Suggestion
punished
such
as background and motives of someone
in order to perform justice and fairness. It is very important because we cannot conduct punishment
to someone
who do not have evil intention to hurt other people
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people, instead
instead
we must help them by giving them social security.Submitted by imammagnific on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite