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In some countries an increasing number of people are suffering from health problem as a result of eating too much fast food. It is therefore necessary for governments to impose a higher tax on this kind of food. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

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The fast-
food
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 is causing several health-related illnesses to the humans and the
government
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 should raise the
price
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 of fast
food
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 according to me. I have two reasons, which could support
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 statement.
First
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, some people have a limited amount of money to spend.
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, it will bring awareness among the people and prevent excessively from eating
junk
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food
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.
Although
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 the high
price
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 could refrain people from eating street foods, it would play a major role, in reducing the health issues around us. In most of the cases, people prefer to buy
food
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 from outside, when they have enough amount of the money to afford it. If the
price
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 of
junk
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food
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 goes up, due to a low budget, people will not think of buying the
food
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 from outside. If the
government
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 does something like:
increase
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an increase
 in the tax, amendment of some bills, they
also
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 try to make people understand why they are doing
this
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. So, imposing more tax would mean, people would know about the
government
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 reasons and they will get to know that the health problem from
junk
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food
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 is a serious problem these days and even some wealthy people would prefer to avoid eating at least some
junk
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 foods. In conclusion, most of the time what the
government
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 does is by understanding the facts of the conditions of the people. So, if something is bringing any kind of harm like fast
food
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, it is worthwhile either ban those foods or make their
price
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 go up.
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, I would be in
favor
promote over another
favour
 of the
government
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 if they increase the tax
of
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on
 all the fast foods around us.

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    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • public health
  • obesity
  • diabetes
  • heart disease
  • health outcomes
  • healthcare costs
  • consumer behavior
  • socio-economic backgrounds
  • ethical implications
  • public health campaigns
  • subsidies
  • regulations
  • nutritional content
  • healthier food options
  • government intervention
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